Every time I MEAN to leave a coherent comment. But it pretty much always boils down to ARGH. Also some panicking in the direction of the characters.
ED. WHAT ARE YOU DOING. God, he's wandering around set on self-destruct. And poor Roy, poor poor Roy. I so rarely feel sorry for him, but wow.
And see, I love your descriptive writing; I love it and envy it. Because concise has its place, but drawing the reader right into the scene definitely has its place, too. And it seems more shiny and special to me, possibly because I can't do it. :D
I don't know whether to look forward to the ending or not. I AM AFRAID. Yet enthused. Afraid in an enthusiastic way?
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Date: 2009-05-27 12:27 am (UTC)Every time I MEAN to leave a coherent comment. But it pretty much always boils down to ARGH. Also some panicking in the direction of the characters.
ED. WHAT ARE YOU DOING. God, he's wandering around set on self-destruct. And poor Roy, poor poor Roy. I so rarely feel sorry for him, but wow.
And see, I love your descriptive writing; I love it and envy it. Because concise has its place, but drawing the reader right into the scene definitely has its place, too. And it seems more shiny and special to me, possibly because I can't do it. :D
I don't know whether to look forward to the ending or not. I AM AFRAID. Yet enthused. Afraid in an enthusiastic way?