Oh Wow! Welcome back, Rusted Dawn. Strangely enough, I remembered quite a bit of the story before reading this wonderful chapter. Guess that is a mark of a great story, and this chapter fit right along with the rest of them.
The roller coaster ride of emotions that both Roy and Ed experienced was overwhelming. You really pulled us right along with them.
And Roy admitted his love for Ed to himself and Ed! Wow! Ed's reaction to that declaration was both startling in his intensity but not unexpected. I can't help but wonder what the hell happened out on that mission.
This was a fantastic chapter, and you have made my day now that you are back writing it again. And now it is my bedtime. I just had to stay up and read this chapter, knowing if I didn't, I'd just be thinking and wondering about it all night long.
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Date: 2011-09-04 03:10 am (UTC)The roller coaster ride of emotions that both Roy and Ed experienced was overwhelming. You really pulled us right along with them.
And Roy admitted his love for Ed to himself and Ed! Wow! Ed's reaction to that declaration was both startling in his intensity but not unexpected. I can't help but wonder what the hell happened out on that mission.
This was a fantastic chapter, and you have made my day now that you are back writing it again. And now it is my bedtime. I just had to stay up and read this chapter, knowing if I didn't, I'd just be thinking and wondering about it all night long.
Hugs,
"T"