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Rusted Dawn, Pt. 4
Sep. 19th, 2008 12:42 pmTitle: Rusted Dawn
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Rating: NC-17, or at least kinda close.
Summary: It's too close; he's crumbling, and he can't stop the slide into this disaster.
previous chapters
A/N: Many apologies for the Scene of Godawful Suck at the end of this segment. I rewrote it something like four times, and still hate it passionately, but this is likely the best I can make it without letting it sit for a month and coming back to it fresh. And even then, I probably wouldn't like it very much, and would just bitch and cry and whine about having to deal with it again.![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
evil_whimsey deserves so much credit, because without her, it would be absolutely dreadful. Such a mess. I'm so unhappy.
So... here it is. I'm moving on. Please don't hate me; I'm really sorry.
( 'Miss me so much?' he drawls, gold eyes dull and flat, and even his humor sounds forced. )
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Rating: NC-17, or at least kinda close.
Summary: It's too close; he's crumbling, and he can't stop the slide into this disaster.
previous chapters
A/N: Many apologies for the Scene of Godawful Suck at the end of this segment. I rewrote it something like four times, and still hate it passionately, but this is likely the best I can make it without letting it sit for a month and coming back to it fresh. And even then, I probably wouldn't like it very much, and would just bitch and cry and whine about having to deal with it again.
evil_whimsey deserves so much credit, because without her, it would be absolutely dreadful. Such a mess. I'm so unhappy.So... here it is. I'm moving on. Please don't hate me; I'm really sorry.
( 'Miss me so much?' he drawls, gold eyes dull and flat, and even his humor sounds forced. )
