Oh lord. Let's just say, a lot of the innuendo was far more sexual, and it was just something I really wasn't comfortable with. I mean, I don't have a problem with writing sex or innuendo, but since this is a missing moment of sorts, and Ed is what- fifteen? fourteen?- that just took things to the Bad Place. And I pretty much pussed out.
I like going balls-to-the-wall with details, and not sparing anything, but I actually creeped myself out on the conception of this piece. Which is why I had to scale it back some, to be able to actually write it. Kimblee is a very sick, scary man.
But thanks for reading, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :)
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Date: 2008-09-18 12:48 pm (UTC)I like going balls-to-the-wall with details, and not sparing anything, but I actually creeped myself out on the conception of this piece. Which is why I had to scale it back some, to be able to actually write it. Kimblee is a very sick, scary man.
But thanks for reading, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :)