Eh, I think it was one of those things where I spent far too much time ironing things out, and trying desperately to keep Roy on track, when he wanted to ramble and meander everywhere but to the point. I still feel like he did his 180 a little too fast, but I simply couldn't get it smoother without spending ages on it. And after spending so much time on it, all I can see are the faults it contains.
And I'm a typically picky author. But I'm really happy that you liked it!
Yeah, Roy has some problems, but he's finally starting to face them. Of course, that opens its own can of worms, but hey. It's never easy.
Thank you so much for continuing to read this, and for letting me know what you think about it. :)
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Date: 2008-09-19 10:40 pm (UTC)And I'm a typically picky author. But I'm really happy that you liked it!
Yeah, Roy has some problems, but he's finally starting to face them. Of course, that opens its own can of worms, but hey. It's never easy.
Thank you so much for continuing to read this, and for letting me know what you think about it. :)